Tuesday, February 07, 2006

Since you have gone...

Since you have gone
The flowers have lost their colour
The birds dont sound sweet anymore
The sun has lost its warmth
The moon has lost its glow
Since you have gone

Since you have gone
The mornings dont feel refreshing
The nights are so depressing
Life is so empty and hollow
Each day is difficult to swallow
Since you have gone

Since you have gone
No touch feels as gentle
No word sounds as kind
No one seems to be my own
I am simply losing my mind
Since you have gone..

10 comments:

~RAUL~ said...

Lovely but sounds depressing.
Seems like you're missing someone !!!

Still ...clap, clap, clap !!!

Sugar&Spice said...

thanks! < bow >

yes.. it was meant to be melancholic...

~RAUL~ said...

!!!

but why write so sad stuff. u shud write something thats cheerful and lively and colorful and full of joy !!!

jaldi se compose karo...

Balaji said...

Its like loosing all adrenaline
Its like feeling anesthetized
Its like you know you exist but you can't feel yourself
You're just incomplete without it ...

Remainds me of the song "Comfortably Numb"- Pink Floyd.

Probably these are the kind of thoughts you get at 2:44 AM :)

Anonymous said...

How can I live without thee, how forgoe
Thy sweet Converse and Love so dearly joyn'd,
To live again in these wilde Woods forlorn?
Should God create another Eve, and I
Another Rib afford, yet loss of thee
Would never from my heart; no no, I feel
The Link of Nature draw me: Flesh of Flesh,
Bone of my Bone thou art, and from thy State
Mine never shall be parted, bliss or woe.

Sher-e-Punjab said...

wow!

Sugar&Spice said...

thnx angad!

Anonymous said...

it's true that a sense of loneliness does creep in. Suddenly one is devoid of that feeling of having someone there for you. You have captured the emotion well dudette. I have scarcely come across a sense of such being as expressed in your "another day.." poems. Sorry to say but the feelings expressed in the two poems are so distinct that it made me wonder..what could have elapsed b/w u guys.

Sugar&Spice said...

thanks Mr/Ms anonymous.. well its only a genuine and a painful heartbreak which can cause such emotions to emerge.. only then can one "hear" the heart really crying.. but all that is past now.

Anonymous said...

Very true. The way your poems can immerse a person and create that image in front of the eyes is wonderful. Genuine feelings in Love and A genuine partner is very hard to come by. I dont know you guys, but can say one thing, past need not always remain past. Hope both of you find that genuity in each other again. That's all that I can wish for you both.

I am just a passerby who was memerised by your writings and could not help but describe my thoughts.